When I started writing in earnest two years ago I created this blog and stumbled across a weekly flash fiction challenge called Friday Fictioneers. A photo would be posted each week and participants were invited to use the prompt to create a hundred word story.
It sounded fun and a good way to kick off my blog. Writing the first story was difficult. It took me ages to edit it down to 100 words. It was nerve wracking sending my first story out into the world but if I’m honest, I didn’t expect anyone to read it, but read it they did. I was soon enveloped into a supportive writing community who have critiqued with kindness, encouraged and soothed every step of the way on my journey to publication, commiserating with every rejection and celebrating my first two novels hitting No. 1 on Amazon. I am so grateful to those bloggers. I don’t feel my writing would be what it is today without my love of flash fiction.
Creating a story, with a beginning, a middle and an end in only a hundred words is far harder than it sounds. Every word needs to count. Every action needs to be clear. Superfluous words stripped away. There is no place, no space for waffle, irrelevant backstory or those annoying adverbs that can sometimes sneak into a longer piece, no matter how vigilant we are. Writing becomes tighter, clearer, pacier.
My first attempts were pitiful. At that time I didn’t know past and present tenses were different things and my writing was muddled. Sifting through the comments each week I rewrote my pieces. My writing became sharper. The intent behind my words became more apparent. And gradually I found I needed to explain my stories less and less. I became more selective about the language I used. Choosing words for maximum emotional impact. Bringing in the senses. My vocabulary expanded and my voice began to shine through.
Sometimes I’ve loved a piece of prose I’ve written for a Friday Fictioneers so much I’ve integrated it into both The Gift and The Sister.
The last prompt was a photo of a cream tunnel with a grey floor. This was my contribution: –
“There are grey spaces in my mind where my memories used to be. Even now, I can’t quite remember the events of that night.
That’s what I tell them anyway. Regret stings yellow and sour at the back of my throat as I swallow down my lies.
It was an accident. It must have been.
Except it wasn’t.
My shame burns red.
Green was the colour of the carpet I loosened at the top the stairs. Blue was your language as you tumbled to the floor.
White are the lilies I lay on your grave.
My soul is black and weeping.”
This photo produced pieces ranging from sci-fi to murder and part of the fun for me once I’ve posted mine is reading everyone else’s stories. We all interpret things in such a different way.
If you love writing why don’t you have a go at joining in? Every Wednesday Rochelle will post a photo with instructions on where to post your link when you’ve written your story so it’s visible to everyone. You can find Rochelle’s blog here.
Dear Louise,
I can’t tell you how affirming your words are. I found that writing flash fiction was the same for me. It teaches you which words are important and which ones add nothing to the scene. It had a profound influence on my novels as well. I’ve never regretted taking on and, ultimately, leading the challenge. Congratulations on your successes. 😀
Shalom,
Rochelle
Thanks Rochelle. I’m so grateful for you taking the time to still run this challenge despite your novel writing. It gave this new writer the confidence she needed to dare to try and I know I am not the only one.
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If you think that Friday Fictioneers is just a diversion for those who have nothing better to do, read this by Louise Jensen.
You’ve come a long way from those 100 words. Thank you for the wonderful inspiration Louise!
Thanks David. I owe a lot to the awesome WordPress Bloggers!
Yes! Yes! Yes! You’re so right, Louise. Writing flash has brought my own writing on no end – it really does teach you how to write economically, which was something I really needed to learn. And Friday Fictioneers is the very best prompt around, with some hugely talented, giving, supportive writers.
Your success is amazing – a testament to your talent, but also your determination to get the craft right too.
Brilliant stuff
Thanks Lynn. I used to feel down because I couldn’t afford a writing course and despite reading a ton of books I didn’t know how to progress. The feedback I’ve received during Friday Fictioneers have been invaluable. And of course I get to connect with other lovely, talented writers like you x
The best prompts act as a kind of writing group, don’t they? You read the great work of others and are inspired to improve your own work … And such lovely people on FF including yourself ! 🙂
I think that’s it. A writing group you can go to in your pyjamas!
Add tea and biscuits and it’s perfection 🙂
Oh always biscuits!
Haha! 🙂
I have to agree. When Sarah Potter suggested I try my hand I thought she was nuts. I am no writer, I just blog stuff… She proved me otherwise as have all the fabulous members of our troupe! I finished The Sister (review on Amazon.ca and GoodReads 😉 ) and am looking forward to reading The Gift! – after I finish Trent’s book of short stories and Claire’s Swimming Lessons!
I don’t have time to write my own, I’m too busy reading all of your (published authors) books!
I love your stories Dale – they are often so positive and inspirational. Leave me with a real feel-good factor. Thanks so much for reviewing The Sister & do hope you enjoy The Gift.
Thank you, Louise. I am so very glad they do!
The pleasure was mine and I’ve no doubt I’ll love The Gift too. 😊
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I have learned the same things from writing flash fiction (and poetry). There are literary magazines that publish flash fiction too, which has helped me get my work noticed while working on my novel. I’m glad you wrote this. There are a few people whose blogs I follow who participate in Friday Fictioneers, and I’ve thought about trying it. I don’t write my flash fiction based on a prompt though, so I have been hesitant about trying it. I’m not sure how successful it would turn out. It sounds fun though.
It was my flash fiction that led to my publishers first noticing me. You never know who is reading! Have a go – you never know until you try!
Excellent post! I agree, flash fiction is a great way to hone your writing skill. Thanks for sharing. @sheilamgood at Cow Pasture Chronicles
It is very addictive! Thanks for reading.
Thank you SOOOOOOO much for sharing that there is a path from flash to a novel. I had fears that my enjoyment of flash might compel me to stay in one spot and not be encouraged to venture out farther. THANK YOU!
I think it had the opposite effect on me. Someone told me once if you are good at flash you can’t write a novel and vice versa – utter nonsense!
What a great post!! Thank you for sharing your journey and giving all of us hope that one day we’ll be published too. I’m hoping to get my first novel down this year and FF certainly helps 🙂
Wishing you lots of luck Jessie.
Thanks for that post, Louise. I’ve also become a fan of the tight discipline of flash fiction. I blgged about writing flash fiction a couple of months ago. I also read and loved The Gift a few weeks ago, My review is on goodreads if you haven’t seen it.
Thanks so much for reviewing The Gift. Much appreciated. Flash fiction is such a learning curve isn’t it?
Friday Fictioneers has helped me snap-up my stories, too. Now when I submit something to my critique group they say things like “Stellar writing! Tension and interest in each sentence” instead of “Really? It took three pages for your characters to walk down the hill?” This post says it all, Louise. Plus I love your writing. Must read The Gift.
Haha “Three pages to walk down a hill” I love that Alicia – and I still write a bit like that!
Lovely piece- you played so beautifully with the colors….I have never tried flash fiction myself….but I stumbled upon your post on facebook and after reading this, I really want to try it…..Thanks so much for the inspiration…..:)….
Thank you! Good luck with writing flash but be warned – it’s addictive!
You expressed my thoughts exactly. Friday Fictioneers is a constant source of inspiration for me. There may never be a novel but I have a treasure box of ideas to pick up again.
You success is well deserved.
Tracey
Thanks Tracey. I love the thought of a treasure box of ideas!
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I couldn’t have said it better. Check out Louise’s novels, The Sister and The Gift.
Wow! Powerful and beautiful. Luscious writing.
Thanks so much Judi!
Thanks for the info. I’ve just started writing flash fiction, and now find my novel is coming along faster than ever.
That’s brilliant! Good luck with the novel.
I have never written flash fiction, however I am in the process of writing a novel. Maybe I should start writing flash fictions.
I think any writing helps. Good luck 😃
Flash fiction is a really amazing way to learn the basic structures of storytelling, both writing it and reading it. I love the piece in this one:) Great post.
It really is. Thanks so much.