I peep through the window and my own lonely face is reflected back at me. I’m so scared Emily won’t come home, but I shake the thought away, force myself to be positive.
My stomach growls, I’m hungry despite my anxiety, and I realise I haven’t eaten in twenty-four hours. I pace up and down, eyes locked on the front door.
The door handle shifts and Emily shuffles into the flat, arm in a sling. I coo loudly, tap my beak against the pane and flap my one good wing. She pushes up the sash and and I peck the breadcrumbs she sprinkles onto the ledge.
Written for Friday Fictioneers – a 100 word story inspired by a prompt. Read the other entries here.
My inspiration this week came from the windows, not only who was on the inside looking out, but also the outside looking in. I liked the idea of a lonely elderly lady befriending an injured pigeon and feeding him. In my mind she falls and is taken into hospital and the pigeon doesn’t understand why his only friend has left him and can’t fly to look for her.

Love it.
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Dear Louise,
Normally I’m not that crazy about stories from the POV of an animal, however you pulled it off with skill. Honestly I needed no explanation but it did confirm that I got it. Very nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Thanks Rochelle.
Lovely turn-around, I didn’t see that coming at all.
That was the plan ๐
Lovely. That was a pleasant surprise ending.
Don’t know why but I did envision the thoughts of an animal, for some reason. The explanation was interesting as background but not really necessary. I really enjoyed this.
Thanks Emilio.
Very good. I was worried about Emily too.
Thanks Tracey.
Loved your take on the prompt!
DJ
Thanks so much Danny.
I love that the story is written in the voice of the bird, and that we don’t discover that fact until the last paragraph. Well done!
Thanks very much, Jan.
Different take on the prompt. I’m not averse to anthropomorphism if it’s handled right, and it was. Well done.
I’ve just learned a new word! Thanks ๐
Birds-eye view: a clever take on the prompt. Well done.
Thanks very much Mick.
This is such a great flash piece. I love how you reveal who the speaker is.
Thank you Melanie.
I didn’t see that comint either, lovely twist and great story.
Thanks very much.
I agree with everybody. Lovely surprise in the tail.
Rosey Pinkerton’s blog
Thanks for commenting Rosey.
Clever twist!
Thanks very much ๐
I’m just going to say… Wow!
Thanks so much Ted.
A fun perspective!
Thanks Dawn.
I like this bonding between the pigeon and the elderly lady. They are a source of comfort for each other. Great story, Louise.
Thanks Amy.
Very nice. I didn’t expect the ending.
Thanks for reading Margaret.
What a lovely story, and with a happy ending too!
Thanks. I like happy endings ๐
This is adorable. It’s nice to know our furry and feathered friends do appreciate us ๐
They do! Thanks ๐
So real. I have been that bird on more occasions than I like to think about. Then the twist to find it is a bird worrying about the hand who feeds him. Lovely flash. Left me with a warm fuzzy feeling.
Thanks Irene. I identified with the bird more than Emily. It’s so lovely to be shown kindness.
Bird’s eye view of the prompt. Nicely done
Clever comment! Thanks.