Do you remember choosing the kitchen lights my love?
The children thought it so funny they looked liked planets. Do you remember buying the glow in the dark stars, holding the ladder while I plastered the ceiling with our make believe universe? We would roll down the blackout blind shutting out the world, and lie on our sleeping bags on the kitchen floor concocting stories of rockets and aliens. We never thought things would change did we? That the children would grow, that we would age.
Do you remember those lights my love? Blink once for yes and twice for no.
Written for Friday Fictioneers. A 100 word story inspired on a photo prompt.

I like your use of the ellipsis in the first line. By omitting the “to be” verb (the chilren thought is was so funny) you lend a subtle regional texture. I’ve seen that pattern of speech in people from Pennsylvania and New York. Well done.
Thanks. I’m UK based.
Louise,
Great story full of memories. Atmospheric and emotional right to the end
Thanks very much.
*sniff sniff* So touching, Louise. Wonderful write. 🙂
Thanks very much Linda.
Now that is a real sting in the tale. And who can’t help thinking, “This could be me, one day”?
Hopefully not Patrick but you never know. Thanks for reading.
that ending got a lump in my throat.
Thanks for reading.
Killer last line. Very good.
Thanks Paul.
Sweet, very nicely done!
Thanks very much.
Very cleverly put together. I felt a sad inevitability about it.
Thanks Sandra. I was sad writing it!
That was so touching!
Thanks Dawn.
touching story.
Thanks for reading.
A devastating end.. I love how you found such a unique voice.
Thanks very much Bjorn.
Grim. This prompt inspires evil!
I’m about to have a read of the others! Thanks for the comment.
So very sad. Well written.
Thanks Caerlynn – much appreciated.
Thanks. Happy to have you visit.
Very touching and probably rings true for many people reading.
Sadly so. Thanks Francesca.
Wonderful story with such a sad ending and with great effect.
Thanks so much.
Last line caught me off guard. Well told!
DJ
Thanks very much DJ.
is he in a coma in a hospital? or is he totally bound unable to move in a playful ritual of their own making? just wondering.
Wow – I never even thought of THAT :-0
Chilling last line. No-one ever thinks it will happen to them. Great story!
Thanks Ali – they certainly don’t (probably a good job)!
We both had the planets, but how different an ending. Touching memory.
Yes. I love reading all the different interpretations.
Oh. The lamps play a bit of a role in my story, too. But your story is so tender and bittersweet. Mine, not so much…
Wow, did not see that coming. Hopefully, won’t see it coming until it’s here! Yeah, those things are hard to read, or live, but so well done here. Thank goodness for memories, it’s the elastic of our loving relationships, holds us all together, no matter what.
Thanks Yolanda. I think we’re better off not knowing what’s to come.
Beautifully Written
Thanks very much.
Nicely done and loved the last line.
Thank you Norma.
Such a moving and poignant piece. Very strong visuals.I didn’t need the picture at all 🙂
Thanks Shailaja. I appreciate that.
Wonderful twist ending. Well done!
Thanks Jan.
Wow! this is really extra special – for many reasons. Well done.
Thanks Alicia 🙂
How sad. I hope she/he can remember and at least have the memory. I’m reading Still Alice right now. Have you read that one? It’s an eye-opener for me. Great story, Louise.
Thanks Amy. I haven’t read that. I read her previous book and am still recovering emotionally from that!
A nice story made sad by the twist at the end. You used great visual descriptions as well and put me into the scene of the young family with their universe on the ceiling.
Nice story. Liked the conversational feel it had and the whammy it delivers in the end with sad twist in the tale.
Thanks very much.
Dear Louise,
Your ending line is like a swift kick to the stomach. Well done. Very well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Much appreciated Rochelle.
eventually everyone ages, eventually everyone longs for the dreams gone by
This is the best FriFic I have read this week. A loving tale of memories and a happy past, then the kicker in the last sentence. Brilliant writing
That’s very kind of you to say – thank you.
Wow. That last line…
Excellent work.
Thanks very much.
Not too sappy, not too sweet. Well done fiction makes me cry. Well done.
Thanks very much.
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Really nice job with this micro-fiction.
This is a great piece of micro fiction!! brings back memories too.
Thanks so much Micki!