We set down our wine glasses, linked hands and asked ‘Is there anyone there? Knock once for yes, twice for no.’
The knock was terrifying, elating. We asked questions of death, of murder, of intent.
The flickering candlelight cast black prowling shadows we shrunk away from, the strangers from our nightmares, the monsters under our beds.
None of us were ever the same again.
Fluorescent lights flicker and the room is swathed in bright, white light. Still the shadows remain.
I sit on the floor in my stark white gown, screw up my eyes tightly and clasp my hands over my ears. When will the knocking stop?
I have been in bed with the Flu for the past week. In my temperature ridden, medicated head this story makes sense, apologies if it doesn’t.
Written for Friday Fictioneers. A 100 word story inspired by a photo prompt. Read the other entries here.

Don’t worry it makes sense- loved it!
Phew. Thanks!
Well done ghost story! Creepy shivers.
Thanks.
I’d say it certainly makes sense, and I hope you’re feeling better.
Personally I’ve never been a fan of the idea of pestering the dead. I don’t think I’d be happy if they starter pestering me back and they are a lot more of them then there are of us. Great story.
Thanks Carol. I’ve never had flu before and can’t believe how terrible I feel.
Ah yes. The flu is one of those that you never quite believe to be as bad as everyone says until you’re bedridden and cursing the distance between you and the paracetamol.
Absolutely.
Wow… it’s like a Hitchcock story! Unusual for you, but I loved it!
Thanks Helena. I think my style has changed a lot over the past few weeks.
I really enjoyed this. Nice contrast between the spooky kind of game to something a lot more serious. Hope you’re feeling better now
Thanks Sandra. I hope to feel better soon.
Flu isn’t nice. I don’t get knocking, just thumping!
It certainly isn’t!
Loved this! I hope that you are feeling much better! Get well quick.. ^..^
Thanks so much.
I’m a sucker for flickering candles. If you can find a better word than flickering to describe a candle flame then let me know. It’s almost a cliche but it’s hard to find one better.
That sounds like a challenge!
Poor you 😦 Having just overcome the flu and 4 lots of
antibionicsantibiotics, I know how you feel. Once when I was a kid (around 8-9) I had a very high fever and was hallucinating. There were people walking around the light shade on the ceiling of my bedroom. I could hear them talking. Freaky stuff 🙂Wow Lyn, sounds horrible but a great book experience!
Hmmm, never thought of that. Thanks Louise 😀
If it weren’t for the wine glasses I would think these were teenagers. IDK why, maybe i have seen too many “I know what you did last summer” type movies. I hope you feel better soon.
I wanted to make it clear they were adults. Bored women who suddenly weren’t so bored!
Aaahhh very good.
i think the knocking won’t end as it’s all in her mind. hope you get well soon.
Thanks very much.
Dear Louise,
I hope that by now you’re feeling better.
Chilling little story. I think these bored ladies should’ve let the dead lie. Good one.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Thanks Rochelle
It makes sense. Too much so.
Thanks Patrick
A bit creepy.. good one.
Thanks very much
Creepy!
Hope you get better soon.
Thanks
Delightfully terrifying!
Thanks John.
Oooo, very spooky !! Loved it, well told 🙂
Thanks Rachel.
Jeepers Creepers… I know how fever ridden minds keep travelling to horrors ! and you did great !
Thanks
I’m so glad I had my flu jab, even more-so after reading that! Spooky
Thanks for reading.
I hope you’re feeling better…
Not yet but thanks!
Creepy, scary, I loved it!
Thanks
My goodness. This is great, Louise. No such flu muse visited me when I had the flu last year. Hmfff!
Hope you feel better soon.
Ellespeth
Thanks. The flu muse – I like that – I may do some work on my novel!
Sorry you are ill. I loved the story. That last line with the question was very effective.
Thanks Judith.
A scary story.. and some questions might better be buried unanswered.–
Absolutely.
Very well written, Louise. Some effective vocabulary used to create a scary scene. 🙂
Thanks Millie
Oooooh, that’s a chilling story. well done!
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This is wonderful! Except that it reminded me of the Oujie Board Craze. Creepy! Hope you are feeling better by now.
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Creepy good! I especially like that involves adults, it has a much sinister feel, they should’ve known better. The white gown somehow accentuates her despair, a great line.
Thanks very much